Rj Rock

I have to agree with the other reviews. Lots of the sentences are ordered weirdly and it is rather off putting. Apart from that though, I have to say that ...

HI 82manycookies I seem to find your work everywhere. I've read most of your Thunder and the Revenant and as I said whilst reviewing the last version of this. It ...

I've taken your advice and axed half of the I hear the whistling's

I really like idea of being merely a head which is trapped in a jar in a labritory whith the cruel ,bad guy, has great potential for a real chilling ...